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Julia sat in tears so desperate to be able to think and focus. But it was no use. No matter how hard she tried she couldn’t focus on her work. ...

I read it. I thought it was very nice. I generally don't read stuff on here, because the majority of it makes me want to fall asleep which I am ...

A few optional suggestions... The blond soldier raised a flat hand to his eye lids and saluted his partners, that were still standing to the left and right, guarding my ...

Hmmm... It's kind of confusing, and you don't really GET into any of the characters. You defentily need to build up the characters WAAAAAAY more, describing physically and mentally. The ...

Wow, this is some seriously interesting work. I think it's very beautiful how the beginning is like a poem, and then you continue on with a realistic air. In my ...

I think the Harry Potter books are much more to the point, descriptions as the ones in LOTR are long and drawn out which makes them oh-so-boring. The Hobbit was ...

I like how much DETAIL you put in, I can't exactly relate, because whenever I go to a party, it sucks. I agree with the girlwhofateloves, I think you probably ...